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Very good read! I was 'rushing' right along with her! But when she saw the need, you could see her compassion kicking in.
Loved it!
I could definitely feel her emotions throughout - from beginning to end. Nicely done.
Yes, in moments like that...our impatience seems so silly. Those time-stopping moments really get our attention, don't they?

May God bless.
Dan Blankenship

Good descriptions. Could see the scene in my mind very clearly and identify with the emotions on both sides. Very nicely put.