The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this character. She seemed grounded in the Lord.
The ending was a bit abrupt though.
I'd like to find out what happened next!
Talk about sticking to the got it right on the money.

Try adding an extra space in between paragraphs. It makes the story easier to read.

I really liked when the woman decided to look up Bible stories about famous women in the Bible.

Good story!
May God bless.

Dan Blankenship

I'm sure many have been through this very experience - thank you for giving them a voice. The ending did come a bit abruptly - bet you wish you had more words!
Thanks for sharing.