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By Cheryl saddlemire
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You have some missing and misspelled words, but these are minor errors that can be easily fixed. If you need to, have someone proofread your entry before you submit, because it's easy to miss little errors. I do it all the time in my writing. :)
You've baked a rich cake with all those ingredients.
I enjoyed a piece - keep writing!!