The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent message in this poem.
01/25/08
A poem!
Well done rythmically and rhyming. Good message
Good job...keep writing.
I like the rythm, and flow. Good advice to live life to capacity.
02/04/08
This is such a lovely piece. So much wisdom packed in and perfectly on topic. This was my favorite stanza:
Middle age approaches.
Dreams come undone!
Rushing about we must repair
Twenty years in one.

Wow!