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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of “A Bird in the Hand is Worth Two in the Bush” (without using the actual phrase or literal example). (01/10/08)
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TITLE: I Can't Decide Ode To The Twenties | Previous Challenge Entry
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Is he my beginning?
Will he be my end?
I don’t know which way to go.
Who do I love?
I thought he should know.
Now he’s hurting
And I am so sad
I just don’t know, can that be bad
Now since I have voiced my doubts
He is really in a pout
Talk to me I want to shout.
My mother says on God I should depend
When making decisions
Questioning how they will end
He loves me, yet it makes me sad
That he is so mad
He is so kind, he does treats me right
He holds me, laughs with me,
Making my sad days light.
But is that all there is,is that alright.
Is there a soul mate still searching for me
If I choose now than where will we be?
This is too much for me
My insides are all a jumble
My head is in a muddle
My hands are wringing too much to clasp in prayer
God are you there?
Are you aware of my dilemma?
Is this the one for me, did I wrongly set him free.
I feel I have made a mistake
I can’t backtrack I can’t heal his break
Is there someone else out there for me
Help me, help me please
He loves me Do I love him?
I can’t decide, only sigh, do I begin again.
Only on God should my decision rest
Only He knows what for me will be the best
I leave this with you, what you say I will do.
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I like the way the self-debate comes out.
The rhythm and rhyme patters are irregular. I don't know if you meant it that way. Also, poetry usually follows the customary punctuation rules.
Good writing... keep it up.