The Official Writing Challenge
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I like this story very much. I once asked God a question and within minutes God had answered it and built up my faith.

The name of the peice is what caught my attention.
You pulled some heavy threads through the weave in the innocence of the story. Good writing and great messages.
I love your title. Great story. It would help old eyes if you would space inbetween paragraphs:) Other than that -- great, great job!
This is so how God works! Unbelievers question where our proof is - it's in moments like those when we raise our own questions and He answers like that. Very nicely written and inspiring!
What a wonderful message. Our mission field is all around us. I think this is very well done.
The only thing I can see "wrong" with this piece is the line spacing. It is well written with a great message, but many readers, I'm thinking, might pass it by because the paragraphs and sentences all seem to blend together.
A great message (ok, more than one) in this piece. The spacing doesn't count with the judges. It is a good story and well told, but the judges may have found the plot lacking in creativity/originality. I don't think this one could have ended up "at the bottom" as you say, it's too good, but it probably was just not quite high enough to place. :)
I LOVED this slice of life -- of how God just so naturally brings ministry our way. I couldn't find anything wrong either other than the spacing. I thought this great.
The story was interesting and well written. I love the idea that we are on the mission field wherever we happen to be.