The Official Writing Challenge
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I love the swinging cadence of your poem, your use of word sounds and their arrangement, and the message you brought out about the origin of teaching and worship on the first day of the week. Your closing was absolutely perfect!
11/01/07
This was great! Well done!
Makes me stop and think which is very good! In my opinion, your thoughts are expressed well. God has been instructing me to slow down and really pay attention. This was like a stop sign helping me do just that. Blessings I was blessed.
Just one note-check spelling before posting.
Shalah
11/03/07
Amazing that you were able to find so many -ence words!
How wonderful to be able to put to poetry the aspects of Sunday School. You are talented for sure.
11/05/07
This reminded me again of how much I owe to the dedicated Sunday School teachers who faithfully taught me God's word. Nicely done.
11/07/07
It is no coincidence that this is so excellent. Son-inspired, I'm sure! Great piece!!!!
Great writing! I like your use of words.