The Official Writing Challenge
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This is just precious in every way, and I love the ending!
Enjoyed the story but was 'awww'd' by the ending. Few things make me go awww. Great job!
What a neat story! Loved the cute title! I could just picture those two saints; sharing as they did their chores and walking with the Lord. Very nice job
Great story. The animals were certainly named in another language; English as we know it has evolved relatively recently from French, Latin, German, and more. Adam did have to care for Eden for as long as he was in it, but probably would have enjoyed it. Finally the switches in theme make the conversation seem really natural. But although the characters are certainly good, I’m not sure if you could call them God’s two old saints.
Great job, this is one of my favorites this week
A quaint story that I enjoyed reading. Good job.