The Official Writing Challenge
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10/19/07
What a neat story.
Watch out for missing quotation marks and verb tenses. ;)
Good job!
10/19/07
Interesting read. A proof reader might be a good idea to help you with the spelling and grammar, because you definitely know how to tell a story....
10/20/07
Oooh, I'd love to read the "other" story--of the two men and what happened in the past.

Moving and tender--I liked this.
Good story telling, I sure could feel the emotions in Paul. A little congested in the length of the paragraphs but overall nicely done! Oh how God blesses all things!