The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, this is a really good story! I truly enjoyed it. Just work on sentence structure and grammatical issues...your writing style is wonderful. You have a charming way of getting the point across.
09/27/07
I like your "chill out" beginning. Your illustrations of how "life" really creeps up on you are good.
09/27/07
Very good illustration of how easy it is to take the care of the world on your shoulders. Your writing style makes the reader want to continue reading, looking forward to the outcome. Thanks for sharing. I NEEDED TO HEAR IT!!!!