The Official Writing Challenge
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Date
09/23/07
I love a good Biblical re-telling, and you've chosen a great story for this topic.

Here's a suggestion: try a re-write with "I" instead of "we." It's difficult to be effective writing from the POV of a whole group of people, and choosing just one of the disciples will make it more personal and relate-able.

Thanks for this interpretation.