The Official Writing Challenge
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Powerful writing here. God was beside you as you wrote this! Keep writing for His purpose.
"God wants us to know that it is all right to grieve..." Powerful line.

You can freshen up your writing by seeking to avoid common "Christian-isms" and finding new ways to express those timeless truths. And I frequently encourage people to avoid dictionary definitions--it's an overused device, and it's better to define your topic by anecdote or example.

This is a moving glimpse into the heart of our Savior.
Very good and very true. Nice job on expressing a truth that is valuable to those who mourn.