The Official Writing Challenge
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comforting words for a son to hear. Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing this. My parents are both in their 70s and I have so many fears but after reading this I too will know where my parents are. God comfort your loss.
I wonderred if someone would write about SAD! Thanks for sharing this piece of your heart.

This was a bit confusing for me; it started out as a story in third person, then more than half-way through it became a piece of first-person nonfiction. If you edit it for another use, think about choosing just one of those approaches.

Great hook at the beginning.
Great story. Can I also suggest that for future articles you put a return carriage after each paragraph, it breaks it up and makes it easier to read.
Very good testimony. Your father's death may have saddened you but you have gone on to a greater purpose.