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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Write something in the YOUNG ADULT or TEEN genre (06/07/07)
One day you were a helpless child and had to cling on to anything that would love you and make you feel safe. Now as time goes by you want to know were do you stand we all have fallen . I tell you my friend as you go into adulthood get up leave your pain and sins at the cross Jesus is your heavenly father in heaven has great plans for you before you were born he spoke life into you. Before your mother new you were in her womb before she new you he new every ounce of you. HE had great ideas for you he has given all of us great gifts to share with this crazy world. Seek his face he is closer then you know when the world and people around you fail his love never fails. My friend I asked Jesus today how much he loves you. He answered back and said this much he reached out his arms and said I gave them life and your sins are washed away at the cross.I have not found one friend that would give there life for us. I know you will be ok in this crazy world. I dont care what they call me when your for Jesus well they reject you they reject Jesus to.
You are loved my friend
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Lisa Holloway
06/16/07
Good concept, but the long sentences make it a bit hard to follow.
Melissa Albrecht
06/20/07
I agree that shorter sentences would make it flow better. But this is very good advice for a teenager; they need people willing to invest and speak into their lives. Well done!!