The Official Writing Challenge
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This is powerful writing and you evoke strong feelings here. There is definite passion in your words. I think it may be a bit intense for children, but I you have talent and your writing shows much promise.
This is very confusing, especially as it is geared to children. But there are a lot of nuggets hidden in this. Keep working, and reading other work. It will give you a lot of insight.