The Official Writing Challenge
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05/04/07
How brave you are, to write out your true feelings--even though they are not always "pretty"--and to share them with us here. If we're honest, I think we'd all admit to feeling that way. Nice job.
05/10/07
The opening paragraph is smooth and professional, while the ending is slightly more disjointed and emotional. The style does seem to match the subject matter--which is very good, by the way--but be aware that as a reader I had to shift gears a little as I went through. Good insight!