The Official Writing Challenge
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04/12/07
This is absolutely beautiful. Your imagery is lovely. Not sure how well it fits the topic, but this truly blessed me.
Wonderful prose. Wonderful message. Good job.
Great writing!
04/13/07
Way too much talent for level one. Good writing.
Very good! Loved the imagery.
Wow! did you enter in the wrong level? This writing does not sound like a beginner! Heart wrenching and beautiful.
04/14/07
Mastercrafting all the way! Thanks for the blessing!
A really extraordinary poem--very well written!
This was a sophisticated and intelligent poem! Wonderful!
04/16/07
Excellently written piece with a powerful ending! It had just the right touch of mystery and suspense. I enjoyed your style of writing very much! :)
Beautiful! With the power to make your heart ache for Sara. Nice title too.
Congratulations on a well desired win. Excellent writing!
04/19/07
Congrats on your win as it was well deserved. The last two stanzas brought some serious goosebumps! A very moving piece.
02/21/08
Wow! I'm not a poet but even I can appreciate your talent! Great writing!
Laury