The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, what imagery and contrast. Very, very well done.

Flow and movement easy.

God bless and keep writing.
Truly effective. You set out images that we can all relate to so we jump right into the picture with you. You brought us to Heaven's Gate, we hear Heaven's Song. Thanks.
Love it, Love it. Something to change the way we think when things get to noise. Keep on shareing!
I enjoyed your images and your rhythm very much. I didn't understand it all but it was a great reminder of the various rhythms of life and the Maker of it all. Nice work
Congratulations on 3rd Place! You've writted such an effective piece that blesses every reader!
Love it Kim!
You did a wonderful job.

Luv ya