The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
This is very gripping reading. I think your story needs to be told--you'll get more readers with a closer edit for spelling, punctuation, sentence structure. Your testimony is an important one.
02/08/07
Wow! I knew that part of Nawlins always existed and you are living proof. I do agree, your story is gripping. Tone it up with punctuation, grammer, etc. Most importantly share your testimony. I believe you have a ministry here.
02/09/07
Your content is good. It would help the reader if you broke up the first paragraph into smaller bits. It is good to read first hand stories of people who thought that they "had it all" and found it was nothing.

Good testimony - thanks for sharing it.