The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved this peom. It was very touching and speaks well of the love and comfort that God offeres his people.
The first line grabbed my attention. Liked the poem and the message it contained.
I'm not a big poetry fan, but I liked this. You did a good job.
The poem was excellent. So many are lonely. The poem brings to mind in the book of James where we are told to remember the fatherless and widows in their affliction and to keep ourselves unspotted from the world. It is a piece that could change a person's heart or at the very least cause someone to look into their soul and that is what christian writing should do. Excellent!
Congratulations Joyce on your 2nd place in the Level 1 Champion Challenge. Great to see poetry in the winning list. You did very well and I really would encourage you to move up to Level 2 now. I think you're ready for it. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
Beautiful poem! Great story and great message.