The Official Writing Challenge
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I really loved this. It kept my attention all the way through.

The reason I read yours first was because of the title....very fitting.

Keep writing!
Enjoyed this. It has a good moral without being over "moralized".
The title made me want to read your story - good job! Also I liked your use of description, especially the coffee, to help color Viky's emotions...You may want to stay away from certain phrases like, "Conscientious Emily" and "Bone dry." But over all I liked it and had a good feel for the conflict and the characters! Good Job!
Very nice story and very believable. I enjoyed this. Thanks so much for sharing it.