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By Alex Felton
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A few technical nitpicks: you use semicolons correctly but perhaps too often. (Many of your sentences have the same structure). And you needn't give your grandpa's nickname (GP) unless you're going to use it again.
This was a really fun read, and I'll look forward to reading more from you.