The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/07
Good dialogue and a great lesson. Risks are scary but worth it!
01/15/07
A nice story with authentic dialog. I love the ending line! I have never heard of milk tarts but they sounded delicious. Nice story and nice job.
01/15/07
I loved it. Probably my favorite story yet! It's so like those pushy friends who love us enough to push us past our comfort levels. Thanks for sharing..