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This story could use dialogue and also descriptions of specific acts or events that bring Father Gracias' character alive. I enjoyed the description of the "approved" pompous pastor flaunting his expensive car. A specific contrasting picture of Father Gracias (perhaps transporting someone in need in his old beat-up car?) would be most effective here.