The Official Writing Challenge
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A very captivating story and it was very good to read. Nice job.
A little suspense and a nice surprise!I thought that the grungy old man was leading the father to Christ at first! I liked that he was an angel. Great writing. Keep it going!
Whoa! What an ending! This was great suspense. You held my attention all the way through, very realistic characters and a good ending. Great job!