The Official Writing Challenge
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Excellent! Never give up on praying for those you love. The Lord is faithful and He will send the Holy Spirit to call her to Himself. A very good story.
LOVE the last sentence especially, but this is compelling from beginning to end. I caught a few incorrect words (then/than, for instance), and would have loved this expanded a bit, but otherwise, this was wonderful!
Great! We should all be "firefighters" for everyone... not just those we love, but for those who are unloveable as well.