The Official Writing Challenge
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This is the first one that I've read so far that addresses 9-11, and it brought a lump to my throat.

Please consider a more careful edit for things like runon sentences and spelling errors (heroes, their). Your writing will have more impact when those are cleaned up.

Thanks for writing this!
This was very nice. I was caught up in the scene and drawn into the man's bravery. Well done!