The Official Writing Challenge
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WOW! That is awesome! You captured my attention and wouldn't let go. But the ending was very good. I didn't expect it. Great job! Oh, I hope this places!
Great story! It definitely held my interest from beginning to end! If you want a critique, I might have made Zeth older than 20 and therefore even more consumed by a life-long quest. I enjoyed reading this!
Fantastic! What an amazing story! This definitely held my attention, and I also loved the ending. Well done!
Wow! What a riveting story! You kept me reading from the first paragraph! This was awesome!