The Official Writing Challenge
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This made me smile! Very cute way of sharing the Garden of Eden story.
How amusing! You told the story well. I love the dialect of the narration, and I really enjoyed the way you told the story.
A very strong performance piece. Hope you get a chance to perform it!
I absolutely loved this! The verse "And don’t worry ‘bout the fat lady,
don’t wait for her to sing ‘cause
It was all over when
Christ was crowned the King."

Was my favorite, but great job-keep it up!
I really enjoyed this poem. It's right to the point. It's serious, but somehow I detect a little humor here.
Leigh, this is just a joy--too funny, and yet with a message.
Very cute and clever - I will definitely be popping over to free reprints to check out the "new, improved version" ;)
Me too on Joanne's! I found myself "rappin'" , and I HATE rap! [eye roll here]. Love it. :)
I love it! The style you used made for a very enjoyable read.
This brought a smile to my face today and your obvious talent shined through. I really liked the line about the Master chaning the lock and keys. This was simply fun and creative...keep up the good work!