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I like your thoughts on how we run from ourselves and God.
Very deep.
I empathize with your 'runner' because I have done plenty of the same sort of escaping like your main character.

A small technical thing that would make this easier to read: leave white space between paragraphs.

You paint a wonderfully descriptive picture of desparation and then sweet submission. Good work! There is much to ponder in this article!
i can't read it. space your paragraphs
You've got a good concept here, and with a few edits, you could have something great.

Reword this phrase: for it seemed this follower could never seem to do anything right. (because it has seem in it twice)

Beware of using too many exclamation points--it's distracting to the reader.

Read through it again, and notice how many sentences start with 'she.' Try re-wording to avoid this.

Again, great idea, and good job!
You tell an awesome story with great emotion and drama. It is true your writing needs some technical work, but that will come. I was very impressed with your story telling. The pace of the story was good, I even knew she was running from herself, but the voice in your story was so true and honest, i ran along for the ride because her character was so refreshing. Thank you and keep working. You are a writer. God bless.