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Powerful imagery. Not sure I could buy a Roman guard's ability to sense the demons and the Threat and the mention of a blue-print a bit of an anachronism. But I liked the wrap up list of materials to build salvation. Very cool.
I don't know if this was your intent, but I feel like the next bit of dialogue from this character would be, "Truly this was the Son of God."

You enter into the thought process of a centurion who we don't encounter except for his presence there. Something must have been going on in their minds, and like your initial emphasis on Jesus' eyes.

Your ending, for some reason, brought to mind Rod Serling's wrapups on the Twilight Zone. Which I like.