I really like the suggestion that Glorybee gave me about using italics for thought, although I generally use italics when someone is stressing something in conversation without necessarily shouting it (exclamation marks I use for shouting).
So, considering most of my characters like to talk alot (I don't know where they get that from), and there can be a bit of stressing with some thoughts thrown in there, anyone have any suggestions on how to best work out a thought, then an articulated point (or thought) that is stressed?
Thoughts and Stressing a point
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Thoughts and Stressing a point
Last edited by jo555 on Wed Jan 11, 2012 3:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Maybe instead of using terminology like, "She thought to herself" which is redundant, in those instances where a thought and stress point are combined I can say...
She said to herself, "I cannot believe this."
What say ye?
She said to herself, "I cannot believe this."
What say ye?
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs
Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Is that the same thing because at first I thought I was being clever?
Now I don't know, may be the same thing with the redundant thingy.
I don't know. I just don't know...
Now I don't know, may be the same thing with the redundant thingy.
I don't know. I just don't know...
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs
Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Starting to feel like the scarecrow in the Wizard of Oz, "If I only had a brain."
Just having some fun. I have this thing that I think I am funny...don't think the verdict is totally in yet on that one...but I'm serious about the questions posed for help.
SOS
Just having some fun. I have this thing that I think I am funny...don't think the verdict is totally in yet on that one...but I'm serious about the questions posed for help.
SOS
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs
Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Now I've totally confused myself. Think it's time to check out of this thread for now because I feel like I am going in circles, like my hampster on that wheel that goes round and round and round without going anywhere and making a lot of noise. Eesh.
Hope to be back when I got some more wonderful input from others.
I need a nap.
zzzzzzzzzzz
Hope to be back when I got some more wonderful input from others.
I need a nap.
zzzzzzzzzzz
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs
Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Jo, you can use italics both for thoughts and for emphasis. There's no problem with that.
Jan couldn't stand it when Ben left his underwear on the bedroom floor. "Honestly, Ben," she said, "the hamper is only two feet away! How hard can it be to just toss 'em in there?" She sighed and picked up two boxers. Do it again, buddy, and it's the couch for you.
I've used italics there in the narrative, for emphasis (stand), in Jan's dialogue, also for emphasis (two), and to indicate Jan's thoughts.
Jan couldn't stand it when Ben left his underwear on the bedroom floor. "Honestly, Ben," she said, "the hamper is only two feet away! How hard can it be to just toss 'em in there?" She sighed and picked up two boxers. Do it again, buddy, and it's the couch for you.
I've used italics there in the narrative, for emphasis (stand), in Jan's dialogue, also for emphasis (two), and to indicate Jan's thoughts.
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Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
I like it and will do that.
Thanks again! You've been a great help!
Thanks again! You've been a great help!
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Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
I'm glad I saw this thread!
I've been having the same debate in my head, trying to get off my own hamster wheel without much success
Thanks for the example; it seems I have been mostly on track, which is great reassurance!
Now, if only I could curb my love affair with !!!!!!s
Blessings,
Helen
I've been having the same debate in my head, trying to get off my own hamster wheel without much success
Thanks for the example; it seems I have been mostly on track, which is great reassurance!
Now, if only I could curb my love affair with !!!!!!s
Blessings,
Helen
Re: Thoughts and Stressing a point
Glad it helped you too. I'm a comma girl myself. ,,,,,helen1975 wrote:I'm glad I saw this thread!
I've been having the same debate in my head, trying to get off my own hamster wheel without much success
Thanks for the example; it seems I have been mostly on track, which is great reassurance!
Now, if only I could curb my love affair with !!!!!!s
Blessings,
Helen
People may be right in their own eyes, but the Lord looks upon the heart - Proverbs