alliteration

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The calm cold quiet of the crisp December night collided with a caution to be careful as Clarence caught the currents on the creek. Cold water washed wistfully by, making waves in the wake of the boat.
I had something really memorable to write here but I forgot what it was.
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Shadows shifted softly through the silent trees, almost expecting the serenity to cease.
Silence. Then an explosion of sight and sound as soldiers dropped swiftly from the stuttering black shape suspended in the midnight sky.
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Lyn (the Dinosaur from Oz)

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Walks in a winter world of white…

Felicities take the form of fairies fluttering by…

Whispers of the wind, which whisk my heart away…

Velvet paths in vivid dreams: a voice that speaks of love…
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They enter in your garden
And cultivate the heart.
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Post by ScarletFury »

lovinthearts wrote: Sara,
Sounds like my diary growing up. What are diaries for, right? Only mine didn't sound as beautiful and poetic. You have a gift.
Aww, thanks! :love2
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Post by GShuler »

Quiz? QUIZ????!!!!!

What kind of writing form is that? I've never heard of it.

Now I feel like writing a song with true potential:

He's not heavy, he's my quiz note holder.
I had something really memorable to write here but I forgot what it was.
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May I work a previous lesson?

Blimp-bump, blimp-bump. Beat comes tumbling over beat; ragged breaths defiant beneath the roaring babble--chatter cut to piecemeal by the crowding walls. Sound on sound, noise on noise--broken into discordant bits, buffeting--buffeting as boldly as the crowding elbows.

That was fun. :D
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My Alliteration Homework

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Jan I'm not sure if this is how to let you have my homework - I hope it is. I've not used the message board much; so I'm not familiar with it.

Home work:-

Will was wondering why Wendy's watch wouldn't work.


I sank to the depths of desolation because of my depression.


Kath came to cuddle and coax the cat back in, but it ignored the invite.
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