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Thank you Jan for you feedback, especially seeing as I did not go through the homework steps, which I only discovered later. I see what you mean about the buckets-rug idea not working. I suppose it is a case of trying to create an image when it just is not there. Sometimes what is in our heads just ...

Hi! I'm late to this, but have been pointed to it by someone in my challenge buddy group. I really need help with imagery. Here is a sentence I really struggled with from my last entry: 'From inside the shop a large, elderly, Greek man wearing a Greek fisherman's cap came towards me,walking between ...

Hi Jan, I have not been able to spend much time on your writing lessons, and now that I have the time I have been poring over as many as I can. They are so useful. Thanks for making this available. I have even been able to use some of your suggestions in this reply. This lesson on commonly misused w...