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- Fri Mar 25, 2011 2:49 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for ETERNITY
- Replies: 9
- Views: 6544
Re: Winners for ETERNITY
Congrats!
- Thu Mar 03, 2011 9:56 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for CENTURIES
- Replies: 17
- Views: 10403
Re: Winners for CENTURIES
Congrats to everyone!!
I peeked and saw 9th place. Wowzer! That's good to me!
I peeked and saw 9th place. Wowzer! That's good to me!

- Sat Feb 26, 2011 3:51 pm
- Forum: The Water Cooler
- Topic: The New New Who's Who List
- Replies: 56
- Views: 54488
Re: The New New Who's Who List
Cajunluvie for Rachel Dorsey
- Wed Feb 16, 2011 9:30 pm
- Forum: Christian Writers' Groups
- Topic: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?
- Replies: 7
- Views: 9847
Re: Florida? Alabama? Georgia? Louisiana?
I used to live in Fl for years. Gainesville and Micanopy.
I just moved back to my hometown in Louisiana in June '09.
So.... this could be a South-East group?
I just moved back to my hometown in Louisiana in June '09.
So.... this could be a South-East group?

- Sat Jan 15, 2011 8:14 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Once in a Blue Moon Bonus Prize Winner
- Replies: 17
- Views: 10147
- Thu Nov 25, 2010 4:09 pm
- Forum: Results and Highest Rankings
- Topic: Winners for THE MEDIA
- Replies: 10
- Views: 5917
- Tue Mar 09, 2010 4:42 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: #8--Writing Out of the Box
- Replies: 94
- Views: 75158
No-No list 1. Someone's house burning accidentally or an arson incident that is being investigated. 2. A car engine catching fire while driving 3. Heating up food or cooking, baking in the kitchen where a fire breaks out 4. Campfire meetings in the woods with the Girl or Boy scouts or at summer camp...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 3:01 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 49148
Yes, Cajunluvie--except that your first tow paragraphs are both Cathie's, and could be combined. I went through my previous entries to see if I could find one with a dialogue between a husband and wife that'd be somewhat equivalent to this. Try this silly story and see if that makes more sense. Kee...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:25 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 49148
Yeah, I see what you're saying. I liked your rewrite of the beginning with Cathie much better than mine. :D Let me rewrite this again to see if I've got this right this time around. She reached across the sofa arm and pulled out a book, The Five Love Languages and waved it in front of his face. "Doe...
- Tue Mar 02, 2010 12:08 am
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 49148
Well, I'll give it a try.... Adrian Beecher smiled at his wife of twenty years. Sliding his arm around her shoulders he remarked, "Cathie, have I mentioned how beautiful you are, lately?" He heard her giggle and saw her head shake a little. "Silly you. You just told me that an hour ago. What's all t...
- Mon Mar 01, 2010 11:23 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #3
- Replies: 54
- Views: 49148
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 4:19 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 68084
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:57 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 68084
Re: Dialog Trouble
“Help! I’m soooo lost, and I can’t find ‘said’ anywhere. Please help me.” “Oh my, you are a sad case for lost and found. I did say to try to move the ‘good stuff’ into the dialog. Maybe I should clarify, ‘said’ is rather bland, not really good stuff, so put it back,” said Jan. “No, no, I can’t. I c...
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:56 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 68084
Cajunluvie, this is definitely over 100 words! Have mercy! You've really skipped into next week's lesson on tagless dialog--which is absolutely fine. So the only thing I'll do is to correct in red a few punctuation/capitalization errors. You're an over-achiever! "You kidding me?" Rose scoffed at he...
- Mon Feb 22, 2010 3:14 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Dialog #2
- Replies: 52
- Views: 68084
"You kidding me?" Rose scoffed at her husband, Tim. "She's coming here? Here? Of all places she could have gone, she picks our house?" "Ma wanted to see the kids. So, I told her she could. No harm done." Tim replied. Rose rolled her eyes and turned her face away from him. "Sure, just the kids." she ...