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- Mon Feb 09, 2009 3:42 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--SLANT RHYME
- Replies: 54
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Here's my attempt at your line. Avoiding my savior, I’d dithered all day I couldn't be bothered to kneel and pray. But thankfully Jesus has mercy to share And when I submitted, He met me in prayer. I'm embarassed to admit I had a hard time finding a slant rhyme in any of my poems, I either used exac...
- Mon Jan 19, 2009 4:19 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--REPETITION
- Replies: 38
- Views: 33747
- Mon Jan 19, 2009 3:12 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: Jan's Master Class--REPETITION
- Replies: 38
- Views: 33747
I know I'm late for class, but I didn't know this class was back in business. This poem I used "she" alot!!!! a good example of what not to do. http://www.faithwriters.com/wc-article-level1-previous.php?id=21999 This one is a poetry form, i wish my mommy mush brain could remember what its called but...
- Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:45 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: anthropomorphism
- Replies: 20
- Views: 15303
- Tue Mar 11, 2008 7:27 pm
- Forum: Jan's Writing Basics
- Topic: anthropomorphism
- Replies: 20
- Views: 15303
anthropomorphism
Hmmmmm.... "Why the long face?" Now thats funny! This one is hard for me. While I like animals and even love my cat. The statement "Animals are people too" Drives me nuts. Hopefully I haven't ostracized all of the animal lovers out there with my revelation.I will give this a try. I'll turn my homewo...