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Leticia Caroccio05/03/04
Water is used to cleanse our bodies and our souls. Water has so many healing qualities, but spiritual water holds more healing than natural water can ever hold. Thank you for sharing.
Dave Wagner05/03/04
I'm having a hard time understanding what your point was with this piece. For all of the words, it doesn't really say anything...just a commercial for water.

What am I missing?
Sara Westhead05/05/04
A good effort, and I can sort of see the pattern you are trying to show. However, the descriptions are a little too basic. More descriptive wording is needed.

Good job, though!
L.M. Lee05/06/04
yep, water is a blessing and the fact that we are about 90% water...we really need it!
Mary C Legg05/06/04
I understand it and the progression from physical to spiritual is clear...and like it. Most of the world does not have access to potable water and I agree, it is a great blessing.
B Price05/06/04
showing the different kinds of water and showing what is is used for.
short... needs a little bit more work. Keep working at it.
Phyllis Inniss 05/07/04
Yes, water is life, both for our spiritual needs, as well as the physical. Perhaps ifyou can't get water for your everyday use, it's a little difficult to concentrate on the spiritual.