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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY how it works   Previous Challenge Entry Topic: light (05/24/04) TITLE: I Am the Comforter -- "The Holy Spirit" By Juanita Pittman-Brown 05/24/04  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND I am the Comforter I am the source Of peace and joy... I am here for you -- I was here before -- You knew The life you know today... So -- When times are hard And darkness Seeks your soul Always remember I am the LIGHT -- The source Of all that was ever Foretold... I am the Comforter I am your friend -- I was at the beginning And I will be with you At the end... PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE Member Comments Member Date Mary Elder-Criss 05/31/04 Ah, Juanita...very nice. I really liked the flow and the message was beautiful. This blessed my day, thank you. ~Mary Marcell Billinghurst 05/31/04 A beautiful poem,and words I needed to hear, confirmation of what God is doing in my life Thank you and God bless you in your writing. Bella Louise 05/31/04 Thankyou-I loved this and it is a true testimony of what God is walking me through at the moment. L.M. Lee 05/31/04 always good to know who the "I AM" is. :-) Gary Sims 05/31/04 Juanita - I will ask you the same question as I have to writers of other poems - doesn't the 150 word rule for this challenge apply to poems? Do you feel it would have ruined it to make it longer than 79 words? Don't get me wrong - I liked the poem - I am just wondering out loud. Deborah Porter  05/31/04 Another lovely poem Juanita, rounded out beautifully at the end. Do have to agree with Gary though about the minimum word limit. Other than that though, it was quite lovely. With love, Deb Juanita Pittman-Brown 06/01/04 I sent a note of thanks to Gary and Deb. I appreciate the fact that they pointed out an oops! that I made. In fairness to all I should have entered the minimum of 150 words as is the requirement. It was an oversight on my behalf, and I needed to make correction and will follow this guideline in the future. I appreciate faithwriters.com. It is such a wonderful medium for writers, and I love being a part of such a lovely community of writers. I will say that I should be able to correct this very easily, since most people who know me well would say that I am never at a loss for words. I do so very much appreciate Gary and Deb's helping me to correct something that is certainly for the benefit of all. Thanks...Juanita Pittman-Brown Melanie Kerr  06/01/04 Ecxellent! I loved everything about this poem. I liked how it made me feel hopeful and confident of God’s presence. Melanie Kerr  06/01/04 B Price 06/03/04 short, to the point, and enjoyed. Lynne Gaunt 06/04/04 Your lovely poem is an eloquent reminder of God's own Spirit - in me! Awesome thoughts! Thank you.

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