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The Home for Christian Writers! The Official Writing Challenge BACK TO CHALLENGE MAIN INSTRUCTIONS how it works submission rules guidelines for choosing a level ENTRIES submit your entry read current entries read past entries challenge winners Our Daily Devotional HERE Place it on your site or receive it daily by email. TRUST JESUS TODAY how it works   Previous Challenge Entry Topic: Paths (05/17/04) TITLE: Would You Walk the Rainbow... By Juanita Pittman-Brown 05/17/04  LEAVE COMMENT ON ARTICLE  SEND A PRIVATE COMMENT  SEND ARTICLE TO A FRIEND Would you walk The rainbow with me -- We can have a wonderful time In the space above... All the colors Make the path So beautiful To see -- Please do come With me... We will return tomorrow After the rain is gone To see God's promise All day long... Again the rainbow In the sky Will invite us to View it with A loving eye... PREVIOUS ENTRY | NEXT ENTRY SUBMIT YOUR ENTRY FOR THIS WEEK'S CHALLENGE Member Comments Member Date Leticia Caroccio 05/24/04 Your title was beautiful and drew my attention. Simple words that spoke volumes. Good work. Patrick Whalen 05/24/04 Interesting but seems to lack breadth and depth. A wonderful title and theme! With more work this could be great! 3 of 5 * - No errors that I could blatantly see but this was pretty free-form * - On topic X – I may be too hard here but even for free-form, I could not find a pattern * - Decent length X – I felt troubled to find order B Price 05/24/04 very short, but I did enjoy it. could work well for the topic of rainbows. L.M. Lee 05/24/04 lovely thoughts. Lynne Gaunt 05/24/04 You created a very nice setting and mood with your poem. It made me smile. Love the title. Thanks. Deborah Porter  05/26/04 Whimsical, charming and very sweet Juanita. Quite delightful little piece. With love, Deb Marcell Billinghurst 05/26/04 A lovely poem and invitation to follow the rainbow, which is a symbol of hope.

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