The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/17
I enjoyed your poem. You've described the first four years of childhood beautifully, in lovely verse.
03/21/17
Very cute. A good rendition of childhood. Hit the topic on the nose. I am getting to really like poetry and will look at yours in the future. I am not well versed on it, but I thought it was well written. I am not sure of the rhythm and thought maybe a couple of stanzas were off a little. Don't take that to the bank. I usually count syllables. I enjoyed it a lot. God bless.
03/22/17
What a delightful read. Great job!