The Official Writing Challenge
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05/30/16
Well, that was creative. I enjoyed it. I thought the ending was a pleasant one. I don't know if Mexico is that against the Bible yet, but it will happen if the Lord tarries.
06/02/16
Congratulations on 9th place in Editor's Choice for this article. Happy dance!
06/02/16
Congratulations, Virgil, on your 9th place EC win.

I liked the backdrop of your story. It felt authentic.
Congratulations, Virgil on your EC for this creative tale. You did a superb job with setting and atmosphere.
06/05/16
Congratulations, Virgil, on your EC place. Your story is a gripping mystery well told.
06/23/16
Nicely told suspenseful tale.