The Official Writing Challenge
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12/11/15
At least you didn't run out of steam before you presented us with some food for thought in some well written verse...but we could have had even more which shows the brilliance in your ending! Powerful message shone in your verse and then you power punch it home with your abrupt ending! Great job!
12/12/15
Your last line of the poem summed the verses up nicely. We all need to be persistent about our passion(s).
12/13/15
This was great!

I loved it.

God bless~