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11/26/15
I love how Chloe broke through your MC's mood - so easely distracted. Thanks for a good fun read.
I love this. What a delightful tale of how little ones can somehow take the most severe cranks of the world and turn them into mush. I truly enjoyed the vivid details. It especially made me smile because the mom in my Wrigley stories (and I did too) always kisses her daughter good night and says Sleep tight, don't let the Elephants bite. I could see a lot of Wrigley in Chloe, so she instantly became a hit for me. Great job,
12/02/15
Really well done, good story.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 12th overall! Happy Dance!