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By C D Swanson
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Three figures surround a huge pot. The figures methodically, and systematically, take turns stirring the contents with a golden ladle. Vapors stream upward as they mix. The figures are clothed in long robes.
FIGURE ONE
“I’m pretty sure we’ll get Tammy. She’s one of us.
She’s ready to join us.”
FIGURE TWO
“I agree without a doubt she’s ours.”
FIGURE THREE
“Can we be so sure?
He’s gotten to our kind many times before.”
FIGURE ONE
“Yeah that’s true…but I’ve got a good feeling about this one.
I know she’s ours.”
FIGURE TWO
“You think so huh?”
FIGURE THREE
“You’ve been disappointed many times before.
What makes you think this one is so different?”
FIGURE ONE
“I’ve years of experience. You know that.
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Interior - A young woman in a car.
She holds a gun while she sobs. Her long blonde hair is matted with blood. Her right eye is swollen shut. She shivers from the night air. She sees her target and slowly raises the gun. She feels pain in her gut and shifts forward. She rocks in place waiting for the hurting to subside. She bites her inner lip to stifle a scream.
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Exterior - In the woods.
FIGURE ONE
“She’ll be ours soon. Very soon.”
FIGURE TWO
“I think she’s going to go for it.
I think she’s going to change.”
FIGURE THREE
“Watch and see what happens next.”
FIGURE ONE
“The two of you watch. I don’t have to.
I know she’s ours now.”
Interior - A young woman in a car.
She grips her stomach, and then looks at the gun she placed on the car seat. She suddenly hears her own voice, “Help me!” Silence engulfs the car after her plea. She opens the car door as a man walks by.
“Oh! My goodness, what happened?”
“Please help me. I’m tired of being a punching bag. I was going to kill my husband tonight, then myself. I need help...”
"Of course! Miss...?
"Just call me Tammy..."
The man catches her in his arms as she collapses.
Exterior – Three figures covered by light surrounding a huge pot.
FIGURE ONE
“I knew she wouldn't do it. I've been an angel for a long time, it gets easier to recognize as the years go by. I knew she was one of us. ”
FIGURE TWO
“I hear the screech of the enemy over yonder.”
FIGURE THREE
“Yes, because one more soul has been saved.
The prayers of the people have been released from the prayer pot.”
Exterior – A brilliant warm inviting light shines even brighter as another soul has been saved. Music along with singing and praise is heard throughout.
THE ONE AND ONLY GREAT I AM I AM
“Well done my faithful ones. Well done…”
Likewise, I say unto you, there is joy in the presence of the angels of God over one sinner that repenteth. Luke 15:10 (KJV)
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