The Official Writing Challenge
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Just lovely. What a wonderful poem! Such clarity of truth in excellent rhythm and rhyme. Loved reading this.
10/25/15
Well done. You presented truth in a compelling piece that ebbs & flows. Your rhymes did not sound contrived or forced, but naturally fit. Best poetic piece I've read so far this week. Blessings.
10/29/15
Lovely descriptions and word images! The last stanzas are so wonderful to read, and knowing how true, a blessing to receive.
10/29/15
Congratulations, Vincent, on your 7th place EC award.

I love the meter and cadence of your poetry.
So glad this wonderful poem received a well deserved EC. Great clarity of truth written in beautiful lines. Many congrats.
10/31/15
Congratulations, Vincent, on your EC for this lovely poem so rich with meaning.