The Official Writing Challenge
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07/10/15
Beautiful.

God bless~
07/12/15
You so seemingly effortlessly create these gorgeous metaphors. I love the "white water racing sunlight," as well as the others mentioned too. You have a perfect crescendo to the sprawling glaciers. Just beautiful on many levels! <3
07/12/15
Such a gorgeous sense of serenity emanates from every line. I'm so glad I read this!
07/12/15
Beautifully penned. I feel I've visited the place by the pictures your words conjured up. Well done with this piece.
07/12/15
Wow! The images you capture don't just place me there, they bring a sense of authenticity, if not familiarity:) Great job!!!!! This should do well I think;)
Reading your poem is like a watching video vignette of your memories., One of my favorites: "Sand villages of wind’s design". Beautiful.
Exquisite prose. You placed my heart right with yours, and thank you so much for this!
07/15/15
Aaaaah! This left me feeling peaceful and content. Lovely!
07/16/15
Congrats!

God bless~
07/17/15
Congratulations, Verna, on your EC. I felt as though I was travelling with you along that highway, seeing the beauty and grandeur your were portraying so well. This is lovely writing.