The Official Writing Challenge
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You have the gift of making me actually like a war story by making the characters so real and memorable.
05/31/15
Your word pictures rang of truth.
I especially liked the MC's reference to being his brothers keeper.
Superbly written historical piece.
06/01/15
Well written. You have personalised the experience of war very well in this account.
06/06/15
um... who are you? humans aren't supposed to be able to use words with such precision!
06/06/15
Oh! you're Ann Grover... it makes sense now:) Great job on this piece!
06/08/15
Congratulations, Ann. I'm not at all surprised to see you in 2nd place for this.