The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great story. It shows what real success is really about. I could easily picture the scenes and the growing boy. The only red ink is write out numbers at least to ten, though many resources say to a hundred. This piece really stood out. It was on topic, yet quite different from the others I've read this week. I really enjoyed it.
05/28/15
Totally credible MC.
So credible that I thought it was a personal experience until I saw your name. So tell us; are you - or are you not - a man named Linda????
But seriously, you have brought an age-old scriptural truth to life in a very readable manner. Congratulations on your HC.
06/26/15
This was a very engaging story. I could identify with the MC on many different levels.It was very realistic. Well written story.