The Official Writing Challenge
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10/24/14
Good title and good story with Biblical reference points.

Nicely done.

God bless~
10/27/14
I love how you transitioned this into remembering that we are all probably guilty of motoring a vehicle correctly or safely. It's true -- I really get upset at others thoughtless driving skills, but ... you know ... I've been the one to pull out too soon or just be in a rush because I didn't leave earlier enough. Some people are really full of road rage -- where they've pulled guns and shot someone because of something so dumb.

I do like this piece. Good job!
10/27/14
I mean --

*motoring a vehicle INCORRECTLY
'Tis true, I think: what goes around comes around. Thanks for the reminder to live thinking, WWJD.
Humor, sci-fi and introspection - what a combination for a terrific entry . . .
Loving you in and through and because of the Christ, Judi
1 Timothy 3:16 KJV
10/28/14
It's funny how the driver ahead is usually an idiot and the one behind is a maniac, but I like the humour and the gentle rebuke you've woven into this one. Well done.
Really great devotional--very well written, and I was all set to borrow your wormhole idea till you talked me out of it!