The Official Writing Challenge
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08/18/14
First I want to apologize on behalf of all those who did not comment on your entry.

I really enjoyed the loving banter between these two characters. There is an enrichment in marital bonds after children have left the nest, and sweet memories to cherish.

There was one or two places I felt the dialogue might not be quite realistic enough. But other than that, I feel that this is a fine piece. Keep on writing and entering!
With the strong character development through dialog, the reader gets an enjoyable bird's eye view of a successful Christian marriage.
08/20/14
Beautifully written, and loved the realistic dialogue and interaction. Great job.

God bless~
Congratulations on ranking 29 overall. Happy Dance!